WALT: write a fictional story about a picture of our choice.
OMG I love it, the taste, the feeling, the smell it was so yum. One day me and my friends signed up for a pie eating contest.
I was so excited yelling and screaming words I have never said, when I first ate the pies I loved it I started munching hard yummmyyy I went for seconds, thirds and fourths I said “ I am such a poaka”I should stop eating but then i just keep on going and going it was my last pie and my companion was nearly done time was ticking 10, 9 I had the strength to munch the whole thing down I made it I yelled Yay I won. My friends were cheering and screaming “you did good work”.